You lived with me like a maze,
and you took me like a shadow,
There you were melted inside me
and I in you,
We got stuck on a sailboat-
We were directed by the will of the wind-
then harbored at a dark shore
where nothing is alive,
and ghosts haunt,
and we were out of breath
blinding ourselves to see
the shimmering stars.
I like the idea of being in the maze and not knowing where you are heading – letting the wind direct the sails – freedom! Great work!
Fantastic imagery!
http://halfwaybetweenthegutter.wordpress.com/2012/05/16/my-oldest-enemy/
nicely painted imagery. love the opening lines here. Thanks
Beautiful–great use of imagery
wow,
a romantic one for you.
🙂