You lived with me like a maze,

and you took me like a shadow,

There you were melted inside me

and I in you,

We got stuck on a sailboat-

We were directed by the will of the wind-

then harbored at a dark shore

where nothing is alive,

and ghosts haunt,

and we were out of breath

blinding ourselves to see

the shimmering stars.


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5 Responses to Maze

  1. I like the idea of being in the maze and not knowing where you are heading – letting the wind direct the sails – freedom! Great work!

  2. hobgoblin2011 says:

    nicely painted imagery. love the opening lines here. Thanks

  3. Angela Cohan says:

    Beautiful–great use of imagery

  4. Lexi Jiao Wu says:


    a romantic one for you.


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